Fits the mood perfectly
Maybe the marimba used has a little too "edgy" sound, but overall this was a pleasant song to listen to and the arrangement was brill :)
Thanks for the review! Are you talking about the main lead? Because that's not a marimba, nor was that instrument used in this song.
Blows your track out of the water
Basically i think this is a brilliant track, although after listening to the original im sorry to inform you that it is by far inferior to this one. This one is vibrant, progressing and fun to listen to. Great job to both of you, though Helth mostly deserves credit for this and im sure you agree :)
Yeah, i definitley agree. The original is pretty old and i was a noob. Well, actually i'm still a noob, but back then i was a bigger noob :p
I'm just glad that Helth decided to remix my old song :-)
The song iself isnt' the best, but the lyrics are absoultely perfect :D
How can i not give it 10/10?
You can't not.
This is the one of the best - if not the best. Ambient song that i have heard in all my life (not that i've heard many, but still, im no stranger in the genre.) The clicks sound nice trough the most of the track - although i think that they should stay in the background. About at 1:59 they get a little too aggresive i think. Anyways.. You definately master the genre, keep exploring it like that and you will soon be the king :D
There are two sets of clicks- so at 1:59, the second set of clicks is present. Experimentation ftw :)
Thanks for the review man. Sorry for the late response.
The *drums* ruin it for me :(
The noice waves that you use as your drums really ruin this for me, if you just added a bassline instead of them - and maybe some drums the track would probhably have hit potential!
I was trying to make it sound like it was made in a 80s NES game. That's why i didn't add any modern isntruments. Play some old NES games and you will hear that it has drums like this ;)
Sry you didn't like this though.
A nice track, but it tends to get a little booring over time. I think you need a stronger "hook" if you know what i mean - that is what makes one addicted to a track! Also you could raise the volume of the drums, and maybe slow them a little down (i mean, fast drums aren't very common in jazz..)
i can see your point about it getting boring over time, i think i should have changed it up more in the ending, but i dont agree with your take on the drums, as fast drums work fine, that and i dont like to be "common"
thanks for the review
The vocals are decent, and the song is also pretty good ;) But its a little too "pink" for me, and the climax is a little too long. You should definately stick to another style if you aksed me ;)
Lol, pink. It's the only song that I've made in this style, so far. Thanks for the review!
Lets start out with saying that the quality of your loop isnt the best. Furthermore i don't like hitler myself, your vocal acting is ok but i wouldnt say good. Not much more to say about this, so i guess im done..
Sorry, my Wavepad trial ran out yesterday so I couldnt use my normal editing program.
ALSO HITLER IS TEH SEX
It was nice, but a little booring!
Good enough, but a little booring and repetitive.. Btw may i ask you what you use for drumming (pattern trigger, keyboard, or just the pattern in fl?
Pattern sequencer in FL
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